What i'm doing to improve

This shot is going to be improved because the camera is slightly shaking and the audience needs to concentrate and see properly what the stalker is doing. This will also make the trailer look a lot more professional.

This is another shot which we are going to edit. We have decided to get rid of this shot and keep the second shot after it where the stalker is already gone. We have decided this as the shot before you can see the victim turn around as she is walking down the same path and he isn't there when she turns around. This will stop confusion in the audience.

In between these two shots, we are going to add another clip. This clip will be in daylight of the stalker looking through the victim's window t where she is in her house. This will show that he not only stalks her in the night time. That impression could be made as right now, all the clips are at night when its dark.

Continuing more filming

Now that most of the trailer is done, it gives me a clear idea of how i can improve it and what additional filming we need to do in order for it to be finished and completed,having told a clear beginning, middle and ending that will entertain my audience and make it look more professional.
The next set of filming will only take some part of the day up as there isn't much left to do. I know that it will need to be filmed in the day time so it will show to the audience that the victim isn't just being stalked in the night time, it is all of the time. Hopefully, the filming will go as quick and clear as the rest of the filming has, and it will be done before the 11th of december.

What were going to film:
-view in kitchen
-new shot of scrolling through the phone
-victim trapped
-victim walking with stalker behind (daylight)
-shot of  stalker with hoodie

Costumes

The victim of the trailer is wearing black jeans, black and white shoes and a black coat. We chose this as it is just a normal casual outfit as she does not realise what is going on.

The stalker is wearing black pants, black and white shoes and a hooded coat. We done this so he is easily hidden in the darkness as he is the stalker. 

Camera Shots

We used a range of camera shots including the following:

Over the shoulder shot- This is used to show the point of view from the stalker.

Long shot- This is used to show the whole of the stalker within the dark surroundings.

This shot is used as the stalker recording the victim which creates tension for the audience.

Medium close up- This is used to the stalker and the victim both together which creats emotion for the audience.

Close up- This is used to show the stalkers eyes to create a dangerous impression to the audience.

We have also added multiple text slides into the trailer as we seen it on a style model and also give the audience more ideas as to why he could be doing what he is doing. I think that adding text into it is more professional than speaking with the trailer as the audience might not be able to concentrate on both ( the shots and the speaking) at the same time. 

Transactions

In the trailer, there is only a few transactions used. i done this because i wanted the trailer to be more thrilling by just using jump cuts. The only transaction used was the cross dissolve and that was used when there was two shots after each other instead of the black screen with writing. I used the transactions at these times to make the trailer look more professional and unique. Also it gives the trailer continuity throughout.

Location and Filming the shots for my trailer

The first thing we done was arrange to meet, me rachel and ethan. Once we had met, we decided that central park was the best location to film for the trailer as we didn't want to use a typical location such as a graveyard. We met at around half 6 so it was just the right time for when it started to get dark.
Each of the shots which are filmed in the trailer are all in central park. We didn't want to choose anything like a grave yard because that happens a lot when people make thriller films and wanted ours to be unique.  We spent around an hour filming all different kinds of shots and eventually finished.

Planning My Story Board

I have starting planning my story board on imovie. I haven't finished my story board just yet but this is the start. This is the board i want to carry out with to make my trailer. I have used a cross dissolve transaction in here too to set the scene and also a black scene as it will make the trailer look more scary and not to know what to expect next.